HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR SALES COPY TO GET MORE SALES Copyright 2002 Bob LeducA few small changes in your sales copy can produce a big increase
number of sales you get from your web pages and sales letters. Here are 12 simple things you can do to improve
effectiveness of your sales copy -- and increase your sales.
1. Make sure every part of your message focuses on
customer. Convert anything about you or your company into a customer benefit. For example, replace "14 years of experience" with "pleasing customers just like you for over 14 years".
2. Write your message
way you would write to one person. Many people will read your sales copy. But each person will read it individually. Effective sales copy makes each reader feel like you are writing personally to him or her.
3. Communicate in simple and informal language. Replace words like "originate" with "start" and "receive" with "get". Use active words in
present tense to grab your prospective customer's attention and hold their interest. People stop reading if they begin to feel bored.
4. Convert technical words and phrases into common words. Use words every prospective customer will clearly understand without stopping to think.
5. Replace general words and phrases with specific descriptions. For example, replace a phrase like "get fast results" with "our new clients average 9 percent more profit in
first 60 days".
6. Divide long paragraphs into 2 or more short paragraphs. People read short paragraphs because they look easy to read. But they skim (or skip) long paragraphs because they look like a challenge.
7. Include some bulleted or numbered lists to make your message: