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“Hello, I’m Joe Smith. I’m an undertaker’s nightmare.” Now you should have
undivided attention of
person you’re talking to. An undertaker’s nightmare? So you go on: “That’s because I want to be buried in paperwork.” [Yes, I know, that was a terrible pun. But be honest – it got your attention, right? And that’s what counts.] “I run a printing business. We do any kind of print run, from as little as 100 copies of a monochrome flyer to ten thousand full-color catalogues. And we promise that we will deliver on time, [USP] so you can be sure to have your materials when you need them [Benefit]. We’re so sure of that that we promise to knock 15% off our fee for each day, should a project ever be late. [Guarantee]”
And that’s your business in a memorable nutshell. Just as
environmental consultant is now known to everybody as “The trash can lady”, this printer could be famous as “The undertaker’s nightmare”. The point is to be instantly recognized and remembered by
people you’ve met – so their next project goes to you instead of
person who just said: “Hello, I’m John Doe and I’m a printer”
So, to recap, a great 10 second introduction needs: ·A way to introduce your business that will grab
listener’s attention. ·A short description of what you do, including your USP and benefits. ·A Guarantee (if you have one. If you don’t, think about getting one!)
Get all these elements together and you’ll see that people will remember you – and give you their business.

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