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Remember to date your letter and include full contact information, including account numbers or any other info that
recipient might need to trace your problem.
State consequences when previous letters have failed to get
problem corrected. It is both unnecessary and ineffective to start out with threats of various punitive actions. Remember,
recipient doesn't appreciate receiving threats any more than you do. But, when previous attempts have failed, it's time to state what you are prepared to do, and when. You might say, "And, if I have not heard from you by
30th of this month, I will take action."
Taking action could mean contacting your credit card company, filing a complaint with a consumer agency such as
Better Business Bureau, seeking legal counsel, etc.
Here is a sample letter that could be used for a first written complaint:
Attention: G. Smith, VP of Customer Relations
Dear G. Smith,
On August 19, 2002, I purchased a widget at Widget Store, 111 Main Street, Big City. On August 20, I returned
widget to your customer service department because it was missing Part #32 and could not be assembled. Your customer service representative ordered
missing part from your warehouse, telling me it would arrive within ten days.
Two months later, it has not arrived. I contacted your customer service department on August 30, September 15, October 1, and October 20th. On each of those occasions, your customer service representative assured me that
missing part is en route from your warehouse.
Today, I asked that my money be refunded since I am unable to use
widget without
missing part. Your customer service representative told me that it is not store policy to refund my money because I opened
package and partially assembled
widget.
I am writing you to request that my money be refunded in full. I cannot use
widget without
part that is missing.
I can be reached at
address given above, or by telephone at (your number).
Yours truly, Dissatisfied Customer
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