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- Does your headline focus on
selling points that distinguish your products and services from
competitions?
Writing Headlines that Get Your Prospects' Attention People look at web sites
same way they look at magazine ads. They scan
page quickly to see if
product or service is something they want. On
web or in a marketing brochure, if you capture their interest, they'll keep reading.
The best way to do this is to give them a clear idea of
problems your products or services can solve and/or
benefits you provide. Use a few carefully selected words such as:
- Leverage your expertise to attract a steady stream of clients - Reliable Office Supplies, free next day delivery. - In-home sports training for exercise enthusiasts - Web and print design that helps your business grow - Costa Rica Travel, Unique off-the-beaten track tours to jungles and beaches
Your page headline should communicate clearly what you offer clients, which problems you solve and
benefits you provide. Do your headlines:
- Clarify what you do? - Describe
problems you solve? - Define whom you do it for? - Explain
benefits? - Emphasis a key selling point? - Compel your prospects to keep reading?
Imagine that you worked at an exercise facility and wanted to attract clients for your massage business. Here are some possible headlines you might use for your flyer and associated critiques.
- George Jenkins Massage (It's your name but so what)
- Are You Bothered By Back Pain (Better, it defines
problem)
- 7 Ways to Get Instant Back Pain Relief (Defines
problem and a solution)
- How Computer Users Can Banish Back Pain in One Hour (Defines who your target market is,
problem and
benefit)
Grab your prospects attention in
first few seconds with your headline. Then follow with compelling copy that clarifies
value of your products and services and you'll generate many more sales. - 2004 © In Mind Communications, LLC. All rights reserved.

The author, Charlie Cook, helps service professionals and small business owners attract more clients and be more successful. Sign up to receive the Free Marketing Guide, '7 Steps to Grow Your Business' and the 'More Business' newsletter, full of practical tips you can use at http://www.charliecook.net