You've got just a few seconds to grab your prospects' attention, spark their interest and motivate them to keep reading whether they're looking at your web site, your letter or your brochure. Headlines are first thing your prospects read. Four out of five people determine whether they keep reading to learn about your products and services on basis of your headline.Do your headlines capture your prospects' attention or do they confuse them and send them away?
Are your headlines prompting prospects to learn about your products and services or click to another web site or throw away your letter?
Avoid three following headline mistakes.
Don't Emphasize Obscure Company Names Most small businesses and many not so small businesses names aren't household words. Unless your name is among top ten most recognized brands such as, Craftsman, Waterford, Rolls Royce, Discovery Channel, WD-40 or Crayola there is a very good chance people won't associate your company name with anything.
Have you ever visited a web site or read a print ad where company's name covered top part of page and it was something like, "Pharos Partners"? Unless name of your company describes what you do, it is not going to grab prospects' attention. Move it to side and make room for a creative headline.
Avoid Welcome Statements On many web sites first line you read is, "Welcome to our Site". There is a reason you don't see these in print ads. Welcome statements are a waste of time in marketing materials; they do little to help prospects understand what you do.
Delete Vague Descriptions and Statements Statements like, "Our purpose is to connect you with information and resources to achieve your maximum potential", could apply to a number of different professions. It could refer to a cooking school, a management consultant or an eldercare program.
- Are you wasting valuable space where your headline goes to feature a company name that doesn't describe what you do?
- Does your headline include "business speak" terms your children or mother-in-law can't explain?
- Is your description of product and services specific or is it so generic that it could apply to other types of businesses?