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How to write more powerful brochures, leaflets and catalogs

Written by Suzan St Maur


Probablyrepparttar most interesting thing about brochures and leaflets is that they’re seldom read in what we’ve come to know asrepparttar 103156 right order – as you would read a book.

Rather inrepparttar 103157 same way that many people read magazines in dentists’ waiting rooms, they will flick through brochures and leaflets and stop to take a longer look at bits that grab their attention. Alternatively they’ll flick allrepparttar 103158 way through and then go back to bits they’ve noticed and that have interested them. They’re just as likely to flick through from back to front as they are from front to back.

What all this teaches us is that despite seeming logical, writing for brochures and leaflets inrepparttar 103159 form of a story that starts atrepparttar 103160 beginning, goes throughrepparttar 103161 middle and finishes atrepparttar 103162 end, is not necessarilyrepparttar 103163 best way forward. Obviously you can’t make every page stand alone with a message on it that says “in case you’re flicking through backwards or only want to read this page, here’s a summary of our corporate profile again.”

But there are some tricks you can use to get this random reading pattern to work a bit more effectively for you, rather than against you.

A lot depends onrepparttar 103164 type and style of brochure or leaflet you want to write, of course. In my experience, generally speakingrepparttar 103165 more specificrepparttar 103166 purpose of a brochure or leafletrepparttar 103167 more likely readers are to read it properly and thoroughly.

If a leaflet contains assembly instructions, or a brochure contains technical specifications of equipment, there’s a good chance that readers will start at least nearrepparttar 103168 beginning and then work through towardsrepparttar 103169 end.

Once again, that’s because readers will only get their full value fromrepparttar 103170 leaflet or brochure –repparttar 103171 “what’s in it for them” – by reading it properly. Where you getrepparttar 103172 worst random grasshopper reading, however, is withrepparttar 103173 less specific documents like “welcome” leaflets or “corporate” brochures. So let’s look at how we can minimizerepparttar 103174 problems with those.

Despite all ofrepparttar 103175 above, often it is still worthwhile to organize your content in a reasonably logical order. Many people do absorb brochures inrepparttar 103176 usual order, and even if they don’t they still expect to findrepparttar 103177 introduction atrepparttar 103178 beginning,repparttar 103179 substantiations inrepparttar 103180 middle andrepparttar 103181 conclusion atrepparttar 103182 end. This approach is useful forrepparttar 103183 moderately subject-specific document, like a leaflet about a new service or a brochure about a new line of garden furniture.

The trick here is to putrepparttar 103184 main points in as crossheadings (some people call them sub-headings) in bold type, so that someone scanningrepparttar 103185 document will getrepparttar 103186 gist of your message even if they don’t have time to readrepparttar 103187 body text.

You should also ensure thatrepparttar 103188 crossheadings make sense in their own right and that understanding them is not wholly dependent on their being read in any particular order. Body text should support and expand on each crossheading and leadrepparttar 103189 reader towardsrepparttar 103190 next one, but without creating a “cliffhanger” (in caserepparttar 103191 reader is going inrepparttar 103192 wrong order).

Forrepparttar 103193 more general subject matter –repparttar 103194 most likely to be skimmed, scanned, flicked through, read upside down or otherwise not absorbed properly at all - here’s some advice from US writer John Butman from “Writing Words That Sell” which he and I co-authored some years back. This is what John calls “chunking:”

“Chunking means thatrepparttar 103195 story you are writing is not, in fact, a story at all … it doesn’t have a sequential flow. It’s a string of tiny stories, each with its own message. Each chunk is relatively separate and each page or page-spread is also reasonably separate. This approach means that you need to be careful about antecedents – you can’t refer to something mentioned on page one, becauserepparttar 103196 reader may have started reading on page twelve.”

I find that John’s “chunking” approach works particularly well when there is a lot of visual material, withrepparttar 103197 “chunks” of text acting almost like expanded captions to illustrations. With “chunking” you may also use crossheadings, but their importance in tellingrepparttar 103198 story by themselves is not as critical. Crossheadings here, then, can be more cryptic or abstract provided that they are relevant.

And a quick word about style, particularly if you are writing a “corporate” brochure or leaflet: this medium, equalled only (perhaps) byrepparttar 103199 “corporate” website isrepparttar 103200 most prone to suffer fromrepparttar 103201 curse of “corporate speak.” Sadly it would be very easy for me to illustrate what I mean just by including excerpts here from corporate brochures I could find inrepparttar 103202 offices of both small and large companies based inrepparttar 103203 city where I live. The curse of “corporate speak” lurks everywhere regardless ofrepparttar 103204 environment, rather like cold viruses or headlice.

Catalogues

Many people fail to realize that catalogues should be written. Often their objective in creating a catalogue is to cram in as many products as they can with descriptive copy kept to a few mis-spelled words in tiny type squashed into a corner. These people arerepparttar 103205 on-paper equivalent ofrepparttar 103206 “stack ‘em high, sell ‘em cheap” species you encounter in retailing.

However in a retail environment customers can usually pick uprepparttar 103207 products, have a good look at them, readrepparttar 103208 on-pack copy and find out all they need to know, sorepparttar 103209 fact that they’re in a no-frills environment doesn’t matter too much.

When a product is pictured inrepparttar 103210 small, two-dimensional environment ofrepparttar 103211 printed page it’s not only no-frills but also very lonely, unlessrepparttar 103212 product hasrepparttar 103213 support of some well-chosen words to inform readers and encourage them to buy it.

Considering that for many businesses and other organizations their catalogue is their only shop window – or at least represents, potentially, a very significant revenue stream – you would think that everyone’s attention and skill would be focused on its written content as much as its other elements. But no.

All too often catalogues look as though their copy has been written by a well-meaning secondary/high school pupil who can look forward to a glorious future as a street sweeper.

Yes, of course some products that get sold via a catalogue do not need a lot of description andrepparttar 103214 only words you need to include are choice of colours/sizes/quantities etc. But what aboutrepparttar 103215 “how to order” messages?

I don’t know about you, but if I’m thinking of buying something from a catalogue there’s nothing that puts me off faster than having to spend a lot of time figuring out how to fill outrepparttar 103216 form, who to makerepparttar 103217 cheque out to and where to mail it, etc.

The same applies if I have to hunt around for website details. It’s not difficult to getrepparttar 103218 process right. Simply work outrepparttar 103219 steps you want customers to take, write them down simply, rough outrepparttar 103220 order form itself, and then try it out on your mother, your brother, your neighbour,repparttar 103221 milkman, or anyone else - provided they are not involved with your organization. That’s a cheap and fast way of discovering any flaws inrepparttar 103222 system, especially small goofs that can get overlooked so easily if you’re too familiar with them.

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