Influences

Written by James Collins


Influences I think it wasrepparttar Russian writer Tolstoy who said thatrepparttar 128717 most significant revolutions were internal; in other words they happen individually and in your head. I can see what he meant, although ifrepparttar 128718 old boy had been around in 1917 he might have bitten his lip.

We tend to think of revolutions as being violent and bloody conflicts, which of course they are,repparttar 128719 French, Russian and American Revolutions being prime examples. Onrepparttar 128720 other hand,repparttar 128721 Industrial Revolution, which, inrepparttar 128722 end was more far-reaching than any ofrepparttar 128723 other contemporary revolutions, was onrepparttar 128724 whole, peaceful.

At this point I have to do a little flag waving for Scotland. Well, I don't have to, but I'm going to. Three important inventions ofrepparttar 128725 time, without which it's difficult to see howrepparttar 128726 Industrial Revolution could have made much progress, were all Scottish. In 1769 James Watt patentedrepparttar 128727 first effective steam engine and subsequently had a unit of power called a Watt, named after him. Then there wasrepparttar 128728 macadamised road, invented by - yes, you've guessed it - a man called McAdam.

Finally there wasrepparttar 128729 pneumatic tyre, invented in Scotland not once but twice, and forty years apart. It was first patented in 1845 by Robert Thomson, used successfully for a while on bicycles and then, unbelievably, forgotten. Forty-three years later John Dunlop re-invented it, andrepparttar 128730 rest, as they say, is history. Robert Thomson, went on to inventrepparttar 128731 fountain pen, and he gets my vote for that, as I detest biro pens (excusez-moi, Monsieur Biro).

Just forrepparttar 128732 record I might as well mention a few other contemporary Scots inventions. James Simpson - first doctor to use anaesthetics, Joseph Lister - first to use antiseptics, The Kelvin scale, Maxwell's equations in Electro-magnetism (whatever they are), Marmalade, The macintosh. A waterproof coat, invented by a Scots chemist called (why, of course) Charles Macintosh. He invented it whilst trying to do something else, but it still counts as a Scottish invention.

I'm tempted to add whisky torepparttar 128733 list, but I have a feeling that this particular invention would have hadrepparttar 128734 effect of slowingrepparttar 128735 march of progress to a walk, or possibly a stagger.

Fortunately we do not have revolutions anymore; we have elections. Not even that business withrepparttar 128736 holes punched in voters' cards inrepparttar 128737 Bush vs Gore election scramble caused more thanrepparttar 128738 American equivalent of a Gallic shrug (and doesn't that seem a long time ago now?)

Allrepparttar 128739 same,repparttar 128740 earth has moved a couple of times in our lifetime (well, in mine, anyhow); once inrepparttar 128741 fifties and then again inrepparttar 128742 nineties, withrepparttar 128743 coming ofrepparttar 128744 communications revolution, based onrepparttar 128745 silicon chip andrepparttar 128746 all-conquering computer. Incidentally, while we're onrepparttar 128747 subject, hands up all those who actually know what a silicon chip is. Hmm, I see you're all with me and Homer Simpson on this one. You remember whenrepparttar 128748 doctor asks him ifrepparttar 128749 alien life form he'd seen was silicon or carbon based, and he thinks for a moment and says, "Um,repparttar 128750 first thing - zilophone".

Anyway,repparttar 128751 fifties, as everyone knows, sawrepparttar 128752 rise ofrepparttar 128753 teenager. Beforerepparttar 128754 fifties, young people wanted nothing more than to grow up like their parents. They dressed like them and probably thought like them. If Dad wanted to wear his trousers under his armpits and have shoulder pads so broad that he looked wider than he was tall, then that was okay for Junior too.

All that changed withrepparttar 128755 coming of James Dean and Marlon Brando. James Dean was gone byrepparttar 128756 time I reached my teens, but I still went throughrepparttar 128757 black leather jacket and white T-shirt phase. Dean had such an impact that he still seems modern today. It's as if he belongs to an entirely different world than, say, Jimmy Stewart.

It wasrepparttar 128758 recent passing of two icons from my early years;repparttar 128759 great Ray Charles, followed by Marlon Brando which set me thinking about my early influences. Inevitably a lot of them were American. At that time inrepparttar 128760 UK we didn't have many international stars, although throughoutrepparttar 128761 history ofrepparttar 128762 cinema there has been a steady trickle of actors fromrepparttar 128763 UK who have made it big time inrepparttar 128764 US; Chaplin, Stan Laurel, Cary Grant (Tony Curtis's atrocious English accent asrepparttar 128765 phoney millionaire in 'Some Like it Hot' was based on Cary Grant's accent), Bob Hope, Hitchcock,repparttar 128766 beautiful Vivien Leigh, picked from thousands to play Scarlet O'Hara in 'Gone Withrepparttar 128767 Wind'("I'll think about it tomorrow"), Elizabeth Taylor, Michael Caine,repparttar 128768 dodgy Hugh Grant, Kate Winslett (Titanic) and Sean Connerry.

Stop Struggling and Write Your Article - Part II

Written by David Roddis


Don’t let overwhelm hold you back— follow this expert advice and start writing your promotional article today.

In Part 1, I talked aboutrepparttar importance of planning and structuring your article. Here are three more essential steps to help you make sure your article is ready to go.

4. Avoid clichés (likerepparttar 128715 plague). As in, clichéd language, clichéd advice, and clichéd topics. To refresh your memory, a cliché is anything that's over-used, banal, or tired. It's anything we've all heard 1,000 times before and hoped we'd never hear again.

Some typical examples of overworked expressions (and there are thousands):

... bring you up to speed, atrepparttar 128716 end ofrepparttar 128717 day, since time immemorial, chilled torepparttar 128718 bone, a gleam in his eye, her heart leapt into her mouth, a level playing field, when all is said and done, onrepparttar 128719 same page ...

Clichéd language can be fixed with a good edit. First, determine whether you really need that phrase. If you do, expressrepparttar 128720 concepts in ordinary terms. So, for "see if we’re onrepparttar 128721 same page", substitute "see if we all agree".

Clichéd advice and topics might include:

"Achieve your goals" "Buildrepparttar 128722 life you want" "Don't worry, be happy" "Empower yourself" and, my personal fave, sent to me in an e-mail newsletter: "Take a bubble bath".

I include in this category any concept that's corny and sentimental, or writing that attempts to expressrepparttar 128723 inexpressible: all those fluttering leaves, vibrant sunsets, and yearning sighs.

It's really tough to write about intense emotions or universal experiences in a way that's original and subtle. Great novelists and poets spend their lives struggling to do this. If you’re not careful, it's easy to end up sounding like a 50-cent greeting card.

Fixing clichéd ideas is more challenging than fixing clichéd language. You need to ask tough questions:

"What does this phrase mean? What am I really saying here? What situations illustrate this? What do I want people to get? What value am I adding here?"

Remember that people are looking for straight talk and solutions to problems. Your solutions. They want your ideas, expressed with your urgency and importance.

So don't give your readers hackneyed ideas expressed in stale language. Don't fob them off with a bubble bath, try shoving them into a brisk, eye-opening cold shower instead.

5. Proofread Your article has to be 100% perfect in grammar, spelling and punctuation beforerepparttar 128724 public gets to see it. The public means anyone visiting your Web site, and anyone you submit your article to for feedback or possible publication.

I confess, I did work as a professional proofreader for a time. And when you spend your life looking for missing periods and dots over i's, you tend to get a little demanding. But there's a reason for my concern.

Your article isn't like a casual e-mail that you zap off without reviewing or editing: It's more permanent and public. Your article is you, and people are going to assess your value by how you present it.

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