How to write more powerful brochures, leaflets and catalogs

Written by Suzan St Maur


Probablyrepparttar most interesting thing about brochures and leaflets is that they’re seldom read in what we’ve come to know asrepparttar 103156 right order – as you would read a book.

Rather inrepparttar 103157 same way that many people read magazines in dentists’ waiting rooms, they will flick through brochures and leaflets and stop to take a longer look at bits that grab their attention. Alternatively they’ll flick allrepparttar 103158 way through and then go back to bits they’ve noticed and that have interested them. They’re just as likely to flick through from back to front as they are from front to back.

What all this teaches us is that despite seeming logical, writing for brochures and leaflets inrepparttar 103159 form of a story that starts atrepparttar 103160 beginning, goes throughrepparttar 103161 middle and finishes atrepparttar 103162 end, is not necessarilyrepparttar 103163 best way forward. Obviously you can’t make every page stand alone with a message on it that says “in case you’re flicking through backwards or only want to read this page, here’s a summary of our corporate profile again.”

But there are some tricks you can use to get this random reading pattern to work a bit more effectively for you, rather than against you.

A lot depends onrepparttar 103164 type and style of brochure or leaflet you want to write, of course. In my experience, generally speakingrepparttar 103165 more specificrepparttar 103166 purpose of a brochure or leafletrepparttar 103167 more likely readers are to read it properly and thoroughly.

If a leaflet contains assembly instructions, or a brochure contains technical specifications of equipment, there’s a good chance that readers will start at least nearrepparttar 103168 beginning and then work through towardsrepparttar 103169 end.

Once again, that’s because readers will only get their full value fromrepparttar 103170 leaflet or brochure –repparttar 103171 “what’s in it for them” – by reading it properly. Where you getrepparttar 103172 worst random grasshopper reading, however, is withrepparttar 103173 less specific documents like “welcome” leaflets or “corporate” brochures. So let’s look at how we can minimizerepparttar 103174 problems with those.

Despite all ofrepparttar 103175 above, often it is still worthwhile to organize your content in a reasonably logical order. Many people do absorb brochures inrepparttar 103176 usual order, and even if they don’t they still expect to findrepparttar 103177 introduction atrepparttar 103178 beginning,repparttar 103179 substantiations inrepparttar 103180 middle andrepparttar 103181 conclusion atrepparttar 103182 end. This approach is useful forrepparttar 103183 moderately subject-specific document, like a leaflet about a new service or a brochure about a new line of garden furniture.

The trick here is to putrepparttar 103184 main points in as crossheadings (some people call them sub-headings) in bold type, so that someone scanningrepparttar 103185 document will getrepparttar 103186 gist of your message even if they don’t have time to readrepparttar 103187 body text.

You should also ensure thatrepparttar 103188 crossheadings make sense in their own right and that understanding them is not wholly dependent on their being read in any particular order. Body text should support and expand on each crossheading and leadrepparttar 103189 reader towardsrepparttar 103190 next one, but without creating a “cliffhanger” (in caserepparttar 103191 reader is going inrepparttar 103192 wrong order).

Forrepparttar 103193 more general subject matter –repparttar 103194 most likely to be skimmed, scanned, flicked through, read upside down or otherwise not absorbed properly at all - here’s some advice from US writer John Butman from “Writing Words That Sell” which he and I co-authored some years back. This is what John calls “chunking:”

“Chunking means thatrepparttar 103195 story you are writing is not, in fact, a story at all … it doesn’t have a sequential flow. It’s a string of tiny stories, each with its own message. Each chunk is relatively separate and each page or page-spread is also reasonably separate. This approach means that you need to be careful about antecedents – you can’t refer to something mentioned on page one, becauserepparttar 103196 reader may have started reading on page twelve.”

I find that John’s “chunking” approach works particularly well when there is a lot of visual material, withrepparttar 103197 “chunks” of text acting almost like expanded captions to illustrations. With “chunking” you may also use crossheadings, but their importance in tellingrepparttar 103198 story by themselves is not as critical. Crossheadings here, then, can be more cryptic or abstract provided that they are relevant.

And a quick word about style, particularly if you are writing a “corporate” brochure or leaflet: this medium, equalled only (perhaps) byrepparttar 103199 “corporate” website isrepparttar 103200 most prone to suffer fromrepparttar 103201 curse of “corporate speak.” Sadly it would be very easy for me to illustrate what I mean just by including excerpts here from corporate brochures I could find inrepparttar 103202 offices of both small and large companies based inrepparttar 103203 city where I live. The curse of “corporate speak” lurks everywhere regardless ofrepparttar 103204 environment, rather like cold viruses or headlice.

Catalogues

Many people fail to realize that catalogues should be written. Often their objective in creating a catalogue is to cram in as many products as they can with descriptive copy kept to a few mis-spelled words in tiny type squashed into a corner. These people arerepparttar 103205 on-paper equivalent ofrepparttar 103206 “stack ‘em high, sell ‘em cheap” species you encounter in retailing.

However in a retail environment customers can usually pick uprepparttar 103207 products, have a good look at them, readrepparttar 103208 on-pack copy and find out all they need to know, sorepparttar 103209 fact that they’re in a no-frills environment doesn’t matter too much.

When a product is pictured inrepparttar 103210 small, two-dimensional environment ofrepparttar 103211 printed page it’s not only no-frills but also very lonely, unlessrepparttar 103212 product hasrepparttar 103213 support of some well-chosen words to inform readers and encourage them to buy it.

Considering that for many businesses and other organizations their catalogue is their only shop window – or at least represents, potentially, a very significant revenue stream – you would think that everyone’s attention and skill would be focused on its written content as much as its other elements. But no.

All too often catalogues look as though their copy has been written by a well-meaning secondary/high school pupil who can look forward to a glorious future as a street sweeper.

Yes, of course some products that get sold via a catalogue do not need a lot of description andrepparttar 103214 only words you need to include are choice of colours/sizes/quantities etc. But what aboutrepparttar 103215 “how to order” messages?

I don’t know about you, but if I’m thinking of buying something from a catalogue there’s nothing that puts me off faster than having to spend a lot of time figuring out how to fill outrepparttar 103216 form, who to makerepparttar 103217 cheque out to and where to mail it, etc.

The same applies if I have to hunt around for website details. It’s not difficult to getrepparttar 103218 process right. Simply work outrepparttar 103219 steps you want customers to take, write them down simply, rough outrepparttar 103220 order form itself, and then try it out on your mother, your brother, your neighbour,repparttar 103221 milkman, or anyone else - provided they are not involved with your organization. That’s a cheap and fast way of discovering any flaws inrepparttar 103222 system, especially small goofs that can get overlooked so easily if you’re too familiar with them.

How to write more powerfully for PR, offline and online

Written by Suzan St Maur


Years ago when my Dad owned a group of local newspapers I spent my school and college vacations working inrepparttar editorial office. We used to amuse ourselves over our sandwiches at lunchtime looking through and trashingrepparttar 103155 endless press releases that would arrive inrepparttar 103156 mail each day, all beautifully produced with glossy photographs (this was in pre-internet days).

We trashed them because all butrepparttar 103157 odd one or two were ill-considered, highly subjective, barely camouflaged advertising copy that had about as much editorial news value as last week’s shopping list.

Why am I telling you all this?

Because despiterepparttar 103158 fact that this happened many years ago, it’s still happening today. Both offline and now online editors continue to laugh sardonically atrepparttar 103159 self-promoting garbage they receive from corporate sources exactly as my Dad and I laughed umpty-dump years ago. I salivate just thinking about how I could spendrepparttar 103160 fortunes wasted on those releases and photographs over so many years.

And why does this continue to happen? I believe it is becauserepparttar 103161 organizations who send out this stuff – particularly their financial managers – just can’t get their heads aroundrepparttar 103162 difference in culture between what they want to say, and what editors need to deliver to their audiences.

Good PR advisers try hard to compensate, but ultimately it’srepparttar 103163 client who pays their fees, and ifrepparttar 103164 client insists on issuing garbage there’s not much a PR adviser can do other than resignrepparttar 103165 business.

Time after time after time I’m called into companies and asked to comment on whyrepparttar 103166 PR coverage they get inrepparttar 103167 media is so poor. 99 times out of a 100 it’s because they’ve issued press releases that are only of interest to themselves and their bosses. And yet when I point this out to them they can’t understand it.

“But our development team worked 14 hours a day for three years to win that contract!” they shout indignantly. “Andrepparttar 103168 CEO had to cut short his vacation in Turks & Caicos just so he could signrepparttar 103169 documents byrepparttar 103170 deadline! I mean, it’srepparttar 103171 most important thing to have happened to us inrepparttar 103172 history ofrepparttar 103173 company!”

“I know,” I croon soothingly, “but those points aren’t of much interest torepparttar 103174 readers of your regional business press, or your trade press for that matter.”

“Well, maybe not,” they reply. “But they are very relevant to us, and to our shareholders. That’s why we made such an elaborate issue of those points inrepparttar 103175 press release.”

Ah, I think to myself as I gaze out ofrepparttar 103176 window to see if my creatively-parked car is going to attractrepparttar 103177 attention of passing traffic policepersons. Here is another problem we encounter with press releases.

It’s called “when is a press release not a press release?” The answer is, when a press release is to be used to impress all sorts of people who are not members ofrepparttar 103178 press. Only we want them to think that this is whatrepparttar 103179 press will write about us, so we put it in a press release. That would be okay as long as that’s as far as it goes.

Butrepparttar 103180 awful truth isrepparttar 103181 same document (paper or electronic) really does get sent out torepparttar 103182 press. And quite rightly they ignore it, once again because it is of no interest torepparttar 103183 readership ofrepparttar 103184 publication concerned.

For Heaven’s sake, you folks who do this sort of thing, please grow up and face reality. If you want to promote your achievements to your share/stockholders or staff or suppliers or whoever, then just go ahead and do it and dress it up in “press release” costume if you must, although I don’t think that fools anybody.

But whatever you do, don’t send it torepparttar 103185 press – and don’t kid yourself or anyone else that to userepparttar 103186 same document for both purposes is a way to economize. It’s a sure way to shoot yourself throughrepparttar 103187 foot and indirectly could cost you a fortune.

If you want to get coverage inrepparttar 103188 media then you must forget all elements of self-congratulation. Whatever information you send out has to have something “in it for them” (the audience) - something new, interesting and relevant. It doesn’t have to be earth-shattering, just worth reading.

If your organisation has done something brilliant and you’re proud of it, by all means say so; just be sure to emphasise what’s great about it forrepparttar 103189 audience and/orrepparttar 103190 rest ofrepparttar 103191 world, not merely for yourselves. Letrepparttar 103192 facts tellrepparttar 103193 story. If your organisation genuinely deserves to be congratulated, it will be.

And you don’t simply haverepparttar 103194 audience to consider in this case, because unlikerepparttar 103195 forms of communication you control, with media coveragerepparttar 103196 decision of whether or not to transmit your message rests with someone else – usuallyrepparttar 103197 editor. Editors and journalists are either very busy or very lazy or both (and don’t chastise me for admitting that, guys. I’ve been there, done it, gotrepparttar 103198 T shirt and drank too much inrepparttar 103199 brasserie at lunchtime too.)

If you supply them with material they can see is relevant to their readers and preferably is usable withrepparttar 103200 minimum of editing, they will warm to it a lot faster than something that may hold a grain of interest but will take someone a whole evening to rewrite and several phone calls or e-mails to check for accuracy.

Try to matchrepparttar 103201 style and writing approach ofrepparttar 103202 publication. If you’re sending a release out to several publications that circulate amongrepparttar 103203 same readership, then one release should be relevant to all. But if you’re aiming at different press groups – sayrepparttar 103204 trade journals andrepparttar 103205 business pages ofrepparttar 103206 regional dailies – you will need to reworkrepparttar 103207 approach of your press release according torepparttar 103208 different audiences.

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