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...Would you take a free $100 bill if you read that ad?
First off, let me ask you a question: If you knew for a fact that
above offer was legitimate and true in every way... How many $100 bills would you buy? (Dumb question, right?) Then why didn't people try to buy thousands of them? There's only one reason: The ad did not have credibility. And even though this example is on
"outside edge",
same problem exists in virtually every ad on
net. I'm here to tell you that no matter how good you think you've established your credibility in your current sales letter, you can do more - and doing so will put your sales through
roof!
OK, what's wrong with
ad we ran?
1) Too many exclamation points. Makes it sound "hypish" and destroys credibility - without credibility, no sale.
2) We don't identify ourselves in
ad. That's a terrible mistake, and I don't just mean our company name... Any scam artist can register a fictitious business name, and they're easy to hide behind. Without a clear identity behind
offer - to defray any fears your prospects may have - even
best offer with a triple your money back guarantee means nothing... you won't get
sale.
You should always have a "clear identity." You should have a phone number, address, and whenever possible a fax number. NEVER use hotmail, usa.net, or other throw-away free email addresses. Those who are out to scam you and run *almost always* use throw-away email addresses - free email addresses. At least with a legitimate ISP email account,
customer has some feeling you can be found if you turn out to be one of
"bad eggs" - a scam artist.
3) Need to give credentials. I should have established that I'm an expert in my field, should have listed famous and successful clients I've worked with ...you get
point. You must do everything you can to show your credentials, because that helps to build credibility.
4) Need testimonials. I should have listed happy customers of ours and happy people who had previous order $100 bills, using FULL names whenever possible, not initials. Testimonials are a great way to gain credibility. Even
weakest of testimonials can make a dramatic difference in your sales. HARVEST those like
golden nuggets they are... When a customer writes you saying nice things, *always* write back and ask, "Can I quote you on that?" - You'll be surprised how many say, "no problem" and this alone can make such a difference in your success you won't believe it until you've tried it.
5) Give full contact info like our business address and phone number to establish that we're "real people". There are many services where for a few dollars a month you can get a "one number for everything" services, taking both voice mail messages and faxes and forwarding them to you via email.
6) Here's a very important one: We need to explain WHY WE ARE DOING THIS. Lots of people miss this point. If I explain that we're giving away $100 bills as an experiment, or because I'm a wealthy philanthropist, etc., people understand what's going on, and there's a better chance they'll believe me.
I hope these tips have been of use to you. If you put these concepts into action in your online marketing, you should easily be able to increase your sales.
P.S. -Once we applied
credibility tactics I just listed, we "sold" a $100 bill to
very first person that we contacted. Yes, they *do* make a difference!!

Mike Enlow is founder of the "Masters of Marketing Inner Circle," and specializes in unusual and low-risk methods for increasing your business, both offline and on. To get his free "Instant Cash Flow System" that earned him $37,000 in two weeks, go to: http://www.enlowcircle.com/go/fullstory