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(Deal with known concerns - It makes your offer more believable.)
As you can see from above examples, here’s bad news: Writing without exclamation points requires more ad copy. (I call that bad news because for person trying to write ad, it seems like more "work".) In fact, when I re-work an ad that is riddled with !!!!’s, sometimes ad winds up being 3 times longer than before.
THE GOOD NEWS
The good news is that longer ad copy is necessary to make point and to make sale, and it maximizes your chances of success.
If you’re still not convinced: Have you ever noticed that on your favorite television sitcoms you never notice laugh-track? ...That’s because you’re laughing at same time. On really BAD sitcoms, laugh-track can drive you crazy with its inane guffawing after every line. That’s because lines aren’t funny, so canned laughs feel forced and remind you how bad show really is.
The same goes with exclamation points. When they naturally follow an unusual or strong statement, you don’t even notice them. But when they follow sentences that just aren’t convincing or exciting, they seem forced and actually DRAW ATTENTION to fact that ad doesn’t seem genuine or effective.
The internet community is an intelligent, educated bunch. They’re more likely to read U.S. Weekly than The National Enquirer. They won’t be sold by empty hype and incomplete explanations. In addition, a good percentage of them have been taken advantage of through internet before. They’re wary - and for good reason. Using too many exclamation points is sign of an amateur, and people want to deal with professionals.
So go forward, be fruitful, and un-multiply. (Your exclamation points, that is!)
Tim Gross is the director of the "Masters of Marketing Inner Circle" as well as being an online marketer and webmaster. He credits his success to using little-used credibility-building tactics. Go to http://www.enlowcircle.com/go/credibility to download a free complete 14-chapter marketing course on credibility and internet marketing now!