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Tip: When you write subheads, strive to make them short and benefit driven. If
subheads are well done, readers with short attention spans can simply read
headlines and subheads and make their buying decision on those alone.
8. No testimonials. Customers who rave about your product or service are extremely effective and should be included in every sales letter. The words from
mind and heart of customers build your credibility. However, most marketers waste
potential impact of testimonials. Common mistakes include using initials rather than
full name, as well as omitting city and state or country.
Tip: When getting written permission to use a testimonial in advertising, also request a photo. Most will happily agree. Photos help to add power to testimonials.
9. No money-back guarantee. Your response to any sales letter will be significantly higher if you include a money-back guarantee.
Tip: The longer
guarantee,
more sales and less returns or refunds requested. For example, 30 days works better than 10 days, 60 days works better than 30 days, etc. A full year "no quibble" guarantee works very well.
10. No P.S. The P.S. is
second most read part of any sales letter. Many people read
headline and then turn to
end of
letter to see who it's from when they read
P.S. My strong recommendation is to never send out a letter of any kind without including a P.S. This includes personal letters. Make it a habit from which you never vary. So when you are writing to your mother, father or friend, end
letter with a P.S.
Tip: When preparing a P.S. for a sales letter, a good formula to follow is to simply restate
biggest benefit of
product,
guarantee and
offer.
Extra Bonus Tip--The signature in any sales letter is very important. When a prospect receives a letter, they look at
headline, who it's from and then
P.S.
A few tips:
1. Make sure
signer is given a title.
2. The signature should be bold and done with a felt tip pen. Most signatures are shaky and weak. They appear to come from someone who is not proud of their letter but apologetic.
3. The signatures should be printed in process blue. No other color--not black or red or purple or green. I've tested other colors and none works as well as process blue. Blue "feels" more natural to
reader. Remember this. When you prepare a sales letter you are asking
recipient to suspend belief while they read your message. Your signature plays a big part in that process.
Sincerely yours,
Ted Nicholas
P.P. "The secret to success, in life and in business, is to work hard at
margin. Relentlessly. It's as powerful as compound interest,
eighth wonder of
world. Those little marginal extra efforts will inevitably grow into something big." --Bill Bonner
Little things mean a lot.
"God is in
details".
Copyright 2003 Nicholas Direct, Inc.

Ted Nicholas is known as the "Entreprenuer's Entrepreneur," having founded and sold 23 companies. He is the author of 14 best-selling books, including: "Magic Words That Bring You Riches" and "How To Form Your Own Corporation Without A Lawyer For Under $75. Go to www.tednicholas.com to subscribe to his free newsletter "The Success Margin."