Show, Don't Tell

Written by Martin Avis

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People remember colorful facts long after allrepparttar rest of your words have been forgotten.

I will always remember a presentation fromrepparttar 129819 London society magazine 'Harper's and Queen.' The presenter (who I have completely forgotten) said thatrepparttar 129820 magazine counted more heads of state and members of royal families amongst its subscribers than any other magazine inrepparttar 129821 world. That statement may have been a complete fabrication, but it painted a clear picture ofrepparttar 129822 magazine that I have never forgotten.

Paint pictures in your writing - web sites, sales letters, presentations, sales stories - and your message will be equally unforgettable.

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Written by Meredith Pond

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Also, don't assume that certain skills and responsibilities won't be applicable torepparttar job you're applying for. When listing your skills, list all of them. If you're applying for a receptionist position, but you have excellent writing skills, say so. If you're a graphic artist by profession but know Microsoft Excel likerepparttar 129817 back of your hand, tell them that, too. When it comes to fundamentals like computer and communication skills, there's no such thing as overkill.

When writing about your education, it's always appropriate to toot your own horn. If you were student body president, say so. If you were a member of your high school or college Key Club, Chess Club, or Lawnchair Rewebbing Association (as I was), put it down. Atrepparttar 129818 very least, such information will arouse curiosity about you and show that you're a well-rounded person.

As far as your GPA is concerned, a high one is always impressive, especially when combined with a lot of extracurricular activities. However, even if your grades weren't always honor roll material, your experience and student involvement will always make that number look better than you think. If your GPA was pretty decent in your eyes, don't feel strange about revealing it.

In college, many of us (myself included) earned higher grades in our specific programs than in college in general. If that'srepparttar 129819 case, you can list both averages separately, or simply state that your English department GPA was a 3.6. Most employers won't ask you to tell them any more than that.

As a general rule, a resume should be comprised of headlines (objective, experience, education, and skills) followed by bullet points, not long paragraphs. HR managers are busy, and they don't have time to sit and read a narrative. Give themrepparttar 129820 information they want, but give it to them briefly, in plain English. In short, include anything that will make you look good torepparttar 129821 professional world without revealing too much personal information or telling a story.

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