Query Letters that Rock

Written by Terri Pilcher


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"Joyful Christian Apoptosis" is a 1,000-word article about my painful start inrepparttar medical wolrd and how, like an unborn child, God killed part of me to make me a useful vessel for him. This is not a negative article. Far from it. God sometimes allows difficult things to happen in our lives to make us more flexible in our ability to serve Him. Rather than asking God, "Why me?", we can ask, "What for?" and say, "Thank you for carrying me through." Because of my difficult start, I became a stay-at-home mother of four, a professional writer, and a college professor of nursing students (all atrepparttar 128605 same time). I thank God forrepparttar 128606 difficulties in my life that have brought me to a place where I am learning to serve Him more each day.

The third paragraph of my query tellsrepparttar 128607 editor why I'mrepparttar 128608 one to writerepparttar 128609 article. It lists related magazines I've been published in and any important personal training or experiences that make me an expert onrepparttar 128610 topic. When I first started writing, I didn't have anything to list here, so I skipped this paragraph. If you can't make it look good, wowrepparttar 128611 editor with your first two paragraphs and you'll still get a "yes" response.

I have published articles in On Mission, Men of Integrity, Spirit Led Writer, Physician Assistant Journal, Advance for Physician Assistants, and many more.

I always add a "thank you for considering this article" comment just before closingrepparttar 128612 query. It shows respect forrepparttar 128613 editor's time. Too many writers don't act professionally, so when you do, you'll get a second look.

Thank you for considering "Joyful Christian Apoptosis".

Editors don't always buyrepparttar 128614 resulting articles, but they almost always ask to see them after reading my query letters. Follow these tips, and you'll findrepparttar 128615 same is true for you.

Good luck! I'll see you in print.

Terri Pilcher is the author of MONEY Markets 101: 101 Markets That Pay Writers in 6 Weeks or Less and the PowerPen Market Search (2 day FREE trial). Both are available at www.powerpenmarketsearch.com. She also offers a FREE weekly e-zine, Writer's Guidelines Magazine available at www.terripilcher.com.


Cooking With Annie Dote

Written by Barbara Carr Phillips


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A way to identify a good anecdote is to pay attention to another person's reaction when you are telling them a story. For example, a few months ago I posted a little story on my mom's group list about a very frustrating but humorous moment I had with my toddler. My e-mail inbox filled up quickly with responses from other moms inrepparttar group who could relate to my saga and enjoyedrepparttar 128602 description ofrepparttar 128603 incident. "Aha," I thought, "that writes."

That evening, I sat down at my computer. I copiedrepparttar 128604 message I posted, added an introduction, a little more background, a couple more related anecdotes and a conclusion. Then I e-mailed it torepparttar 128605 editor of an anthology. Less than twenty-four hours later, I received an e-mail response.

At first I was a little worried. I thought a response that speedy could only mean I forgot to attachrepparttar 128606 manuscript. Or maybe she did receive it, and was promptly rejecting it.

I clicked onrepparttar 128607 e-mail and was happy to discover I received an acceptance. It'srepparttar 128608 first and last time I've received such a quick response, but if I hadn't been perceptive about how enjoyablerepparttar 128609 little anecdote was, I would have forgottenrepparttar 128610 incident completely and lostrepparttar 128611 story.

Keeping a personal journal is also a very effective way to capture your anecdotes until you can get back to them. Find a journal that is small enough to carry in your purse or pocket, and take it with you everywhere.

Record every interesting thing you hear, church sermons, funny things people say, lyrics to songs onrepparttar 128612 radio. Pretty soon, it will become second nature, and people will begin to peer at you curiously and say, "um, what are you writing in that little book?" They're worried you're taking notes about them, of course.

Journals arerepparttar 128613 writer's cookbook. We store our delicious morsels of words in them until it's time to write something nourishing. We may have lots of ideas, but if we don't record them, they are soon forgotten. Don't allow your writing to suffer from malnutrition. Take notes about your life!

May God bless you withrepparttar 128614 right anecdote to cure your blank page. And enough journals to keep you well fed. Happy writing.



Barbara Carr Phillips, journaling instructor, believes dreams come true when you journal your way to success. Visit http://www.journalworkshops.net to order your one-to-one journaling workshop or to sign up for her free ezine.


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