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Massive blocks of text in sales copy are just not cool.
Reading from a computer screen is already much more strenuous to most people than reading offline documents, so make your sales page easy on
eyes by using paragraphs that are no longer than 4-6 sentences each.
BLOOPER #4: "Is it a person, place, or thing, Pat?"
If your visitors don't know what you're selling, they won't be very compelled to buy it -- even if it IS
greatest widget in
history of widgethood. After all, if they don't KNOW it's a widget, why would they want it?
Let me give you an example.
The website of one "multi-millionaire" is selling a mystery item designed to tell you how to make millions. Throughout their sales letter, they give vague "details" of their own personal plight to making millions with "just a little work" by using their formula.
Even more interestingly, this person doesn't offer a money-back guarantee. Instead, they offer to "give you a formula that works." (In short, all they "guarantee" is that you'll get
product you're paying for --
"secret" of how they made their millions. Oh joy!)
If it's such an effective formula, why not describe it? And more importantly, why not offer a money-back guarantee? Did I mention that a very minute percentage of customers ever take advantage of such a guarantee?
Umm ... I'm not buying it. Either figuratively OR literally.
BLOOPER #5: "If you're going to sell it, SELL it!"
In 99% of sales letters I've seen, it's quite obvious that
writer is intending to sell me something. Not to say that this is BAD at all, because hey -- we all gotta eat. However, if I'm going to buy something, I'll need to know
price.
Case in point, I've seen sales letters deliver a huge pitch about their product, but have no price for it listed anywhere on
page. Click to
order page, and still
same deal. Fill out a form, advance to
next screen, and still no go. Get to
billing information page, and only THEN do you see
price of
product.
Why was it such a secret?
If your product is worth
price, don't hide it. Trust me. In doing so you'll make your prospects think that you hid it because your product is overpriced -- and they'll leave without buying.
Final Words...
So -- how does YOUR sales letter measure up? If you're currently committing any of
five deadly sales copy sins above, it's not to late to repent and reform.
Remember, you could be driving hundreds of hot prospects away with each one of
flubs above. Take
opportunity now to fix your sales copy before you forget, and start increasing your hits to sales ratio immediately. I'm rooting for you!

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