Making Better Word Choices – 4 Examples

Written by David J. Clapham


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Although he is not tall, he is a good basketball player. While he listened torepparttar radio, he finished his homework.

A writer’s choice between “since” and “because” also involvesrepparttar 128595 possibility of a reference to time. Many people use “since” when they really mean “because,” this is rarely a correct use ofrepparttar 128596 word “since.” When choosing a word to suggest “from a definite past time until now”1 use “since.” If you are not referring to time, “because” should berepparttar 128597 word you choose. Try using “because,” if your sentence doesn’t make sense then you probably want to use “since.” Inrepparttar 128598 examples belowrepparttar 128599 two incorrect sentences do not sound correct, whilerepparttar 128600 correct sentences actually sound better.

Incorrect:He had few friends since he was too annoying. Correct:He had few friends because he was too annoying. Incorrect:He has not ridden a bicycle because 1990. Correct:He has not ridden a bicycle since 1990.

Whether you are writing an essay for school or you are writing a speech for your CEO, choose your words carefully because what people hear or read from you can make a big difference in their opinion about you and your intelligence. For anyone writing, regardless of topic, length, or purpose, ask for assistance if you need it, not doing so can have serious repercussions on your reputation.

1 Merriam-Webster Online. 20 January 2005. http://m-w.com/

David is the owner of Blue Arch Consulting, a proofreading and editing business helping clients worldwide to generate English documents of all types. Their website is at http://www.blue-arch.net.


How To Use Punctuation

Written by Rumki Sen


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Note: Ifrepparttar clauses are long and already contain commas, separate them with a semicolon rather than a comma.

Wrong: If a man begins with certainties, he shall end in doubts, but if he will be content to begin with doubts, he shall end in certainties. - Francis Bacon

Right: If a man begins with certainties, he shall end in doubts; but if he will be content to begin with doubts, he shall end in certainties. - Francis Bacon

Run-on sentences - Where Run-on sentences are concerned (in case you don't know what it is, a run-on occurs when two independent clauses are not separated by punctuation or conjunction), add a period, or a semi colon, or a comma in places of separation.

Example

Wrong: A good student can score full marks in Mathematics it's his analytical ability that will help him achieve that.

Right: A good student can score full marks in Mathematics. It's his analytical ability that will help him achieve that.

Use of Quotation Marks - Use quotation marks to indicate direct quotation.

Example

"That guy knows me," Mr. Wong said, "very well."

Note: Never use it for indirect quotation (a restatement of someone’s words).

According to Mr. Wong, that guy knows him very well.

Use single quotation marks to indicate a quote within a quote.

Example

Wrong: Richard wrote, "When Berkeley said, "esse est percipii", he meant thatrepparttar 128592 existence of a thing consists in its being perceived."

Right: Richard wrote, "When Berkeley said, 'esse est percipii,' he meant thatrepparttar 128593 existence of a thing consists in its being perceived."

Note: Always putrepparttar 128594 comma and final period insiderepparttar 128595 quotation marks, and put other punctuation marks outside unless they are part ofrepparttar 128596 thing being quoted.

There are many other frequently used punctuation errors, butrepparttar 128597 above-discussed ones are those I have mostly encountered in several writings. Before putting punctuation marks in your sentences, always ask yourself what meaning you want to convey torepparttar 128598 readers. Accordingly, putrepparttar 128599 marks. In caserepparttar 128600 sentence becomes difficult to punctuate, consider rewriting it, because when a sentence is well written, it almost punctuates itself.

Rumki Sen is the founder of Perfect Editing Solutions (www.perfectediting.com), a professional firm providing a Proofreading and Copyediting service to websites and online documents. Her company also offers resume-writing services. Contact Rumki Sen at rumki@perfectediting.com


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