Continued from page 1
Let's say you're walking along a crowded street and you spot a friend of yours on other side of street. Let say his name is Joe. How do you get Joe's attention? You could start jumping up and down and yelling, "Hey! Over Here!" That might work. A better way would be to yell "Hey Joe! Over Here!" That'd be more likely to catch Joe's attention, wouldn't it? Because he hears his name. Personalization increases response dramatically.
Now let's take that thought and apply it to your headline. Adding personalization to your headline is a great idea. Use recipient's name right there in headline. It makes message more personal and increases chance message is read.
Let's take that one step further. Say you're looking for a job as a nurse and you know hiring manger's name is Susan. Susan is understaffed and looking for nurses. So give Susan an attention-grabbing headline to open your cover letter.
How about this, "Susan, Finally! A Nurse Who Can Do More Than Take A Temperature! But don't stop there. Make it big and bold. Remember, it's a headline. Make sure Susan notices headline. Grab Susan's attention.
How could Susan possibly not notice that headline strategically placed at top of your cover letter? And you can take that simple concept and apply it to a cover letter to any hiring manager for any job.
So work on an attention-grabbing opening sentence and in Part II we'll talk about interest, desire, and action.
To Your Extreme Success, Robert A Phillips
Robert is an author, speaker, and real estate entrepreneur(both on & offline). Robert applied his direct response marketing skills to develop a Killer Cover Letter System that produced 3 job offers in 72 hours. Please visit www.CoverLetterGuru.com to find out more about Robert's Killer Cover Letter "System." To request your FREE Report send a blank email to report@CoverLetterGuru.com