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2. Is your sales letter difficult to read?
If you compare to my original version, you will find out that Mar 13 version has a little changes... Where is that?
If you look at: The "Mar 13" version: "Here are some of my strategies you will discover....."
The Original Version: "Here are some lists of what "make1million" member...."
Compare to both contents, it's very difficult to get meaning of what I am trying to mention in content with a small and narrow box. Visitors are required to read every details.... and you know they won't do that.
3. Is your web content simplified enough to attract your visitors?
Scroll down to very bottom part of Mar 13 version (old.html) and compare with my original version.
In my original letter, I mentioned:
"Are you ready to Start Making Money Online?"
Can you compare with what I wrote in Mar 13 version? If you couldn't find it, read again letter... I wrote: "Ask Yourself these questions..."
>> What is different, Henry?
My original version is easier to understand and more challenging people's mind.
On other hand, "Mar 13" version will be ignored by 90% of my web visitors.
As a conclusion, if you would like to change your website from "$50 = $50" to "$50 = $200" or more, you need to Re-examine your website every time you do advertisements.
>> Henry, What happen if my website does not generate $50 = $50?
If your website is simply break even or losing money, you need to watch out two things:
A. The company that you advertised your website on.
Many companies are offering hype advertising methods. If you are just trying one company and results in NO sales, you should try two others different companies.
We're living in world that is full of scams. Therefore, if results are still below break even or not even making you 100% in profits, you MUST:
B. Look at your web content.
Read on what you wrote and ask yourself whether you are interested in buying your products... If you do or don't know, ask other marketers about their opinions.
I hope this gives you some ideas....
And if you would like to find out which online marketing strategies work well and which do NOT, look at my website guide "Make 1 Million". It comes with unlimited consultation. You'll find it in intro page of http://www.make1million.com site.
Success is yours, Henry Gold
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