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8. Are facts, figures, locales, believable and/or correct? Are
language, actions, and attire of
characters appropriate for
time period and setting of
story?
9. Is
writing fresh, free of clichés? Does it show
author’s own unique style? Are viewpoint changes clear and well handled?
10. Is
grammar correct? Is
spelling accurate? Is
manuscript professionally prepared?
11. Reveal your characters primarily through their actions, not by telling your reader about them. Keep in mind that good fiction reveals rather than explains. Your goal in each piece of fiction is to provide your reader with actual experience, not merely with concepts and outlines of events.
12. Read each of your drafts carefully, aloud. If you can’t experience a scene as if you were living through it yourself, work on it some more.
13. Your ending must leave your readers satisfied—even if it is unhappy, unexpected, or inconclusive. Above all, your readers must feel
piece was worth their time and attention. Pay special attention to your final sentence, image and/or line of dialogue, because your readers certainly will.
14. Remember that stories over 4,000 words are very difficult to place.
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