A Writing Exercise That Increases Awareness And Description Skills

Written by Catherine Franz


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Here are nine prompts to help you expand your experience. * Write words describing your atmosphere--the quality of air. * What arerepparttar clouds doing? Can you see animals in their shapes? * The temperature of your location. * The source of light and its quality. * Where are people standing or sitting? * Shadows, are they're any? Where and how do they fall? * Predominant colors, wall colors, wallpaper, molding, chair railing, textured ceiling. * What do you smell? Using comparisons are a great way to relate to your reader. The air feels like just getting out ofrepparttar 128796 fogged shower stall. * Are there other people around you? How do they smell, their clothes, their shoes? Guess at what they might do for a living. Are they dressed like someone on their way to work, doesn't work, a mom, dad, baker, or what?

After you are comfortable describing your environment, spicerepparttar 128797 exercise up another notch. Compare your descriptive words to something else. For example: The room you are sitting in feels like a sauna with my clothes on.

Continue spicing uprepparttar 128798 exercise to increase your awareness and descriptive powers--use people and objects. Since you are most familiar with yourself, begin there.

After practicing onrepparttar 128799 most familiar subject, yourself, create a list of other familiar people in your life. Then sortrepparttar 128800 list from most familiar to least. Continue downrepparttar 128801 list. Somewhere during these lists and practice sessions, you will begin to feel comfortable with your skill.

You can continue takingrepparttar 128802 exercise to another level. This time you are ready to expand your awareness and adaptation to words. Visitrepparttar 128803 local mall; sit inrepparttar 128804 food court for smorgasbord of new enriching thoughts-to-words experiences.

Here are 11 prompts to help you expand your levels: * Describe what you are wearing. * How does your body feel? * What are your hands doing? * How does your throat feel? * How are you holding your mouth? * Eye movement * Breathing * How do you feel in general, in detail? * Name your mood. Does it have a flavor and color? * Describe your feelings with reference to music. A certain song or type of music. * How does your hair smell, clothes,repparttar 128805 chair you're sitting on,repparttar 128806 book you're reading?

Be patient with yourself while practicing. This exercise isn'trepparttar 128807 easiest to complete, however, it isrepparttar 128808 most effective. Even if you aren't a writer, this exercise will help you triple your awareness skills in a short time period1. This exercise also helps police officers, speakers, judges, attorneys, or anyone else that uses their awareness skills to see and put it into words. This is also a NLP--neurolinguistics programming skill--for those aware of this process.



Catherine Franz provides writing and marketing assistance to individuals who want to write and businesses that want to increase business. For more ideas and programs, visit The Abundance Center at: http://www.abundancecenter.com


Why Do We Publish?

Written by Michael LaRocca


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But, then comes marketing. Biggest pain in the... Well, let's just say it makes me want to not publish sometimes. So, why publish?

I've enteredrepparttar EPPIES twice, and been a finalist both times. Offrepparttar 128794 top of my head, I can think of no other ebook award that gets my attention. The second time one of my books was an EPPIE finalist, I made some wisecrack in an author's egroup about how "finalist" is a synonym for "loser" and was raked overrepparttar 128795 coals.

Oops!

(Maybe I annoyed entrants who weren't finalists. I'd always wondered if they existed...)

So, let's say I'm not publishing for money or awards. They sing a siren song to new authors which this jaded old bastard quit hearing long ago. Really, I got all that mess out of my system inrepparttar 128796 previous millenium. So, why do I still publish? What are my rewards? Let me mention a few.

A psychologist turned English teacher formed a women's reading group atrepparttar 128797 university where we once worked together in China. Her concept was women readers, women writers. Butrepparttar 128798 first bookrepparttar 128799 group ever discussed was my very own RISING FROM THE ASHES, which is about Mom. My only foray into "women's literature." I couldn't attendrepparttar 128800 reading group, since I'm a guy, but my wife was there. What I learned about my book is priceless, as is knowing what those young students discussed because of my writing. Issues of such depth that I'd be proud to inspire any student, in any country, in any language, to tackle them.

I used to work on North Carolina hog farms. I enjoyedrepparttar 128801 company of some damn fine people at every one of them. Hog farming is hard work. This isn'trepparttar 128802 backyard family farm, folks, this is 13 people with 98 boars, 3500 sows, and allrepparttar 128803 babies they can make. One of my toughest coworkers was a lesbian who could break Xena in half, and my one foray into writing horror gave her nightmares.

I don't consider myself a poet, and I believe most ofrepparttar 128804 reading world agrees with me. But, I have published 6 poems. There is one that a hog farm coworker insists will be read at his funeral. Don't ask me why he was planning his funeral during our lunch break because I have no idea. But, well, I guess I'm invited, in a manner of speaking. Back when I was young enough to plan my own funeral, it involved a friend playing Elton John's FUNERAL FOR A FRIEND. So, compared to Sir Elton John, I know a guy who would prefer that somebody read MY poetry. Freaky.

Master Pizza, 30th Street, Tampa, Florida. A bunch of drunken Italian relatives reading one of my less-than-serious poems ALOUD between pitchers of beer. It was like a Joe Dolce moment.

I was working as a security guard in a particularly unpleasant place. This was 17 years ago, I think. A fellow guard read one of my short stories. It is, by far,repparttar 128805 most allegorical thing I've ever written. I can't tell you how many times I've thought about throwing it out. But then, I remember Bob's words. "This is me. This is my life." Me too, old pal, and I don't care if you and I arerepparttar 128806 only two readers to have any idea what I'm talking about. {Scapegoat Bob!}

I've written some pretty heady volumes, but I've also written quite a few short works. I've heard from numerous students here in China that, "This isrepparttar 128807 first book in English I've ever finished reading." When I write, I certainly never set out to help anyone learn English. (Some of my editors may claim I never learnedrepparttar 128808 language.) And, students will LIE to teachers. But I've decided that at least one was tellingrepparttar 128809 truth.

When I leftrepparttar 128810 US, I embarked on several journeys. Learning to live in China. Learning to love again. Taking another shot atrepparttar 128811 writer dream. And, eventually, teaching. After all that, I tried my hand at writing humor forrepparttar 128812 first time. Every time I hear my wife laugh at something I've written, I file it away as a reason to keep writing.

I've written one play in my life. I was young, and quite hooked onrepparttar 128813 album (pre-CD days) JESUS CHRIST SUPERSTAR. So, you guessed it, I tackled JC. I wrote something that nobody can read without having a powerful reaction. Readers love it or they hate it. I'm proud of that. And hey, it's only one act long. I have a short attention span.

I loaned Clint "Two Dawgs" Hill my very first book. My cousin. He took it to Durham (North Carolina) and loaned it to a bunch of hippie buddies. He asked for another, becauserepparttar 128814 first one fell apart from overuse. That's why we publish. People all but fighting forrepparttar 128815 chance to read my words. And heck,repparttar 128816 book wasn't even good yet. It's 20 years older now.

I mention all this forrepparttar 128817 jaded old bastards who have a few novels and bit of minor success under their belts. Nobody else is reading this anymore, are they?

So, maybe this is why we don't just stop whenrepparttar 128818 book is written, stick it in a drawer, and uncorkrepparttar 128819 champagne. Although I do hope you uncorkedrepparttar 128820 champagne. This planet contains far too many people who "want to be authors" but who haven't written a book. Never have, never will. Meanwhile, you and I are sitting here knowing we had no choice. We had to write.

And now, I guess it's time to publish. WHO MOVED MY RICE? is available from Books Unbound.



Michael LaRocca's website at http://freereads.topcities.com was chosen by WRITER'S DIGEST as one of The 101 Best Websites For Writers in 2001 and 2002. He published four novels in 2002 and another in 2004. He also works as an editor for an e-publisher. He teaches English at a university in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, China, and publishes the free weekly newsletter Mad About Books.




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