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Here are some of these ideas to keep in mind when you are trying to structure your opening.
1) State
offer. This is so simple many people never think of it. Put
offer right at
top of your page in a headline or bold type. The offer includes
product that is for sale, its price,
terms of
sale, and
guarantee.
2) Announce it! If you have something new, start your letter with this important information. Nothing gets attention and builds excitement like
word NEW. I always put it in all capitals to give it added excitement.
3) Flatter
reader. There is nothing a customer likes more than to feel as though they are set apart from "the crowd". Describe
type of person who would probably be one of your best customers. Tell why
way they feel, work, think, or play is important and deserves attention. Use
word "YOU" as often as you can.
4) Use a provocative quote. Quote a famous person or a customer. The quote should arouse curiosity. It should make
reader want to find out more about your product.
After you have your opening, good copy will usually follow suit. Just remember to use catchy phrases and not over hype
product. If something seems too good to be true, most people will probably disregard
offer. Ending with a PS is a nice touch, but remember that many people read
PS before they read
actual letter.

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